my connection of the story was when my mum made me go to the shop but i didn't want to go. When we went to the shop i went somewhere else and got lost some my mum came to look for me and when she found me i was crying
This is an excellent connection you have made with the text and yourself. Your pictures clearly show how you and your mum were feeling when you got lost. Next time, make sure you talk about the connection with the text.
hi AJ this was an amazing post but it could of used a bit more descriptive words so maybe next time you post you could add a bit more descriptive language :)
Hi AJ,
ReplyDeleteThis is an excellent connection you have made with the text and yourself. Your pictures clearly show how you and your mum were feeling when you got lost.
Next time, make sure you talk about the connection with the text.
Blog you later,
Mr Edwards
hi AJ this was an amazing post but it could of used a bit more descriptive words so maybe next time you post you could add a bit more descriptive language :)
ReplyDeletehi Aj i like your connection story because it looked cool, but some thing did not make sense so you should probably take your time.
ReplyDeleteHi Aj,Nice story.But you should put words so we know what is going on in the story.
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